A couple of quick comments on this story conference transcript:
Avoid subtlety, go for directness with regard to story points (an example being the ‘hag’ change from Queen’s breaking of the mirror causing her transformation, due to the curse of 7, to transforming herself through mixing magic potions).
Go for a dramatic climax at end of scene, and rotate between dramatic (queen at mirror threatening SW’s death) and entertaining (dwarf’s house bed scene) scenes.
Concentrating on and whittling down businesses to the main story points — throwing out extraneous.
Establishing present and planting future story points.
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